What is Natural is Kicked it Aside

faliol

Acolyte
Here's a couple more errors I found...

On http://www.ligotti.net/showthread.php?t=1136&garpg=15#contentstart
If so, then it will be kicked it aside as nihilistic, pessimistic, anti-social, or just plain goofy. It will not receive government or corporate funding. Conclusion: there is no greatness in humankind, only the voracity for infantile skirmishes in a sandbox. How better to conceal our quandaries? How better to keep our heads out of the know?
"it will be kicked it aside" sounds weird....should not it be "it will be kicked aside"

Also on http://www.ligotti.net/showthread.php?t=1136&garpg=3#contentstart, the preface...
thing we know for sure: the difference between what it natural and what is not.
Should not the part "what it natural and what is not" be "what is natural and what is not"

that's it for now...yes I think it needs to be proofread a lot.

kevin
 
Dear Kevin,

Thanks for spotting a few of my typos. When a manuscript starts out with so many of them, as mine always do, it's hard to clean them all up. I wish I could "do" typos the way they should be done, but this is not one of my talents.

Tom Ligotti
 
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